To begin with, thanks @Luke for such a cool discussion board, and because of all of the contributors who share recommendation right here! You’re all nice!
Yesterday I made my first Touchdown web page. I discovered it in a range from @Anstrex , it was for a product strategy and in a unique language. I want this LP for a cell subscription supply for girls’s health in South Africa. With the assistance of VC Code, I changed all the photographs and wrote fully new textual content. (Thanks @Nick in your video tutorials). I translated it by way of Google, as a result of… I write unhealthy English.
As the primary message and set off, I made a decision to decide on a widely known (in accordance with data on the Web) South African mannequin, with the pretext that this was her writer’s course. I spent half a day on this web page and am very disenchanted as I obtained only a few clicks on the buttons (CTR roughly 5%). Visitors – Propeller Adverts. for instance, out of 20-30 customers who went to the touchdown web page, just one clicks on the buttons… Maybe this isn’t sufficient, what do you suppose?
I additionally modified the colour of the button to match the
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